2011년 1월 7일 금요일

Writing Chain:Sky+Food=Skyfeeds!

     This is my story of the writing chain. Everyone wrote parts of the essay, and the story was not really the summary I have expected. I learned that even if the topic is the same, the story can change a lot and it depends on who wrote it and what do they think about the topic. Still, I like it and was fun! Here is my story.
     The world of "Skyfeeds" is a place where food falls from the sky. Sometimes, chocolate rain or icecream snow, or a steak storm comes! The broadcasts tell people the food-weather, and the people just bring out plates, cuyps and a nice fork. The restaurants does not have a roof, so it was free! Food fell down 4 times, breakfast, lunch, dinner, and for a snack. Everyone was very happy about  the weather; free food!
     But, at the GLPS, there was another problem. When steak storm came at 12:30, students could not eat. If the icecream snow falls, the road was slippery. Even if it was the English building, instead of the Chung-mu or Da-san building, 45% of students broke their legs, not correct time, and a slippery road. This made GLPS cancel once, too. So, the PA and TAs thought hard about it.
     The head master was very concerned about this problem. So he called a pure plastic company. They asked the president of the company if he could build a large roof, they needed some money, but the parents did  not send their students to the GLPS because they heard that it was very dangerous.
     The head master and the teachers had an emergancy meeting about this problem. They thought and thought for 3 days but they had no result. On the fourth day, a call came from a parent that said that they are not sending their son after the vacation which heard that it is very dangerous. Unfortunately, the school almost had to be closed.
     One day, the great detective Yon came with his friend, Dean Crawford. Yon loved GLPS and the Minsa Highschool. So he came to help suggesting to make a bed with the food falling. Then, the students will want to come because it is a food bed! Students can eat when they sleep! Pillars made by chocolate, matris made out of steak, pillows made out of bread, and bed quilts made by spagetti and icecream.
     Detective Yon made a nice suggestion, but the food started to rot. So the GLPS campus was doomed to its end. Then detective Yon's smart friend, Mr. Crawford suggested to sell all the food to make the giant roof. The food was sold daily and GLPS got rich, so they made the plastic roof and a factory that cleaned the food and sold it. As a result, more kids came to GLPS and became fat, and Mr. Crawford and detective Yon got gold medals of honor and the teachers bought in their statues, and there they are, in the front of the dormitory!

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